Hi Mijoo

You gave thoughtful answers to the questions. The errors were mainly missing articles. I loved your sentence ‘The government’s decision was wrong whether their actions were well-intentioned or not‘.

See my feedback below. The first document (Edited Version) has the editing marks so that you can try and correct your work yourself. The second document (Corrected Version) is the corrected version so that you can see the corrections I have suggested.

Claire