Hi Varindar

I have corrected your notes from when you talked about Sports Facilities in class.

The main correction here was the missing articles (a, an or the) but as you were just writing the notes in class before you spoke it is understandable that you missed them out. The other main error was using ‘got’ instead of ‘has’.

Some good sentences considering you wrote them quickly in class.

See below for my detailed feedback. The first document (Edited Version) has the editing marks so that you can try and correct your work yourself. The second document (Corrected Version) is the corrected version so that you can see the corrections I have suggested.

Claire

 

Edited Version

Corrected Version